Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Adventure of two mouses

There were two pure mouses living in a nature. The two young mouses really liked adventure. They were happy enough in the nature living with their parents. they were friends, and very friendly. A life in nature was so peaceful and happy, but little boring. And they had to work everyday to live. They didn't like to work, so they wanted more interesting and free life.

One day, they found a beautiful lights beyond the mountains. They heard from other mouses that the lights over the mountains is a city. They heard there are many interesting things. So they decided to go to the city themselves, secretly. They depart to city midnight, when their parents were sleeping. On the way to go to the city, they met many different animals but if they say to animals they're going to the city, All of the animals tell them that city is very dangerous place. Animals say nobody couldn't come back to their home if they go to city. But two mouses keep going to the city, and finally, they found a huge city.

The city was very noisy, and bright. There were many cars and people although it was a night. They go around the city, and met city mouses drinking alcohol and singing. City mouses are very dirty, liked to do bad things like steal human's foods and things. On the next morning, city moues give them a food, and they really liked it. City mouses requires them to live with them. If they live with them, They can eat every delicious foods like cheese every day, and don't have to work, because they can just steal human's foods. But two pure mouses don't want to do bad things like city mouses.

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1 comment:

  1. I like your story I-Seul and you have written it with good imagination and creativity using good illustration in support of your story. The plural of mouse is mice. I like the ending 3 the best. Keep up the good work!

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