Tuesday, August 13, 2013

My Poem

Hello? My name is Youn I Seul. I'm going to make a diamante poem. There are Synonym diamonte poem and Antonym Diamante poem. and I'm going to make a synonym Diamante poem first.


             Grandmother
           Kindness, Gentle
       Singing, Walking, Smiling
   Cane, Wrinkles, Dot, Curly hair
        Crying, Loving, Sharing
          Warm, Comfortable
                 Mother


This is my synonym diamante poem. I wrote this poem thinking my grandmother. She is very Kindness, Gentle, and warm.
I also feel comfortable and happy when I'm with her. I really like her, and I'm missing her a lot.


                    Heaven
               Happiness, Glad
   Praying, Laughing, Loving, Blessing
       Place, Forever, No end, Life
  Crying,  Screaming, Regretting, Frustrating
                 Painful, Cruel
                       Hell
               

This is my antonym diamante poem. I think heaven and hell is really antonym. Both of them is place, and forever, but heaven is really happiness, and Hell is really painful. I want to go heaven later and I will try to go heaven.
 


     

     






                                       
                                         

1 comment:

  1. What beautiful poems you have written Iseul. I like the one about your grandmother :) Keep up the good work!!

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